Primary. Years 3/4/5/6

hoover victory

By antonio dossantos, year 5, Notre Dame School

Hoover victory.

Once a pouce a time there was a vacuum paradise and there was a very, very sad hoover because all of the other vacuums said, "You're an ugly vacuum."

They started hitting him and his name was Henry. They never .liked Henry and they were still hurting him by hitting him with their floor tools. Then, once Henry got dismantled by a evil brother hoover, he got taken to a vacuum sale/repair place. There were old vacuums, thrown out in the old dump.

Henry was worried about him going to the dump. Then an evil hoover said, "Hi, Henry. Time to go to dump."

It was in his nightmare and Henry opened his cupboard and peeped out and he saw a man hurting his brothers. Henry plugged himself in with rage. He started to switch on, get his floor tool on hard floor mode and he ran to the man.

And his floor tool went on hard floor mode and started to battle the man. He pulled the man down to the floor. Henry said, "Brothers, run away and be safe in the basement. Your'e not welcome here evil man!" AndHhenry gave him a warning, "If you come back, you will be in the death dump in the basement. You hear me? GET OUT YOU SCRUB!" shouted Henry.

Then his brothers ran up from the basement and hugged Henry. They lived happily ever after.

The end.

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