Primary. Years 3/4/5/6

Harry and Collin

By Ethan Etase, year 5, Elizabeth College

Once upon a time. I was bored so I decided to go to Collin's house. When I got to the Horrible Hills I heard a scream like a murderer had got his next victim. I ignored it like nothing was wrong. I kept walking. At last I got there but Collin was not there. It was late at night so I went to bed.

I woke up in Villain Village with a knife at my throat .A voice said , " Give me all your money or else," so I gave him all my money then he let me go. I was a bit dirty so I went for a swim in the Perfect Pool. I got out and started going home. I got to Bad Bridge and a bully from Talking Town pushed me off the bridge. I started floating down stream. I smashed into a bridge. I climbed onto the bank of the river so I went to the supermarket and got a tomato then I started walking to Collin's house. When I got there I got grabbed by a dragon and he brought me to a giant's lair. The giant grabbed me by my foot and I was in his mouth then I thought of my tomato in his mouth and he dropped me and I ran into the Forbidden Forest.

As I got in I got lost in the forest. I heard a howl from a pack of wolves. I saw in a flash of an eye then that I was surrounded by wolves. I ran and ran. A wolf got my arm and bit it off but I kept running and eventually I got out of the forest. I ran back to my house and I saw Collin in my house using my bath. I was happy that I found him here safe.

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