Intermediate. Years 7/8/9

sea land

By declan wallace, year 9, La Mare de Carteret School

It was a sunny day at the beach. There were fish and all other sea animals walking around everywhere. There were no people, sharks were drinking coke and the fish were drinking red bull. The fish and sharks invited everyone to a beach party for Bob because it was his birthday, so they invited the sea horses, Whale Shark,Basking Shark, Thresher Sharks ,Bull Shark ,Tiger Shark. All the sharks came, but no fish came because Bob had no friends so the only mate that Bob had was Armands the shark.

There was a great white called fin. Bob was a catfish. Bob tried to save his mate, but Fin the angry fat shark killed them both so Armands said "You killed Bob." Fin the angry fat shark said he wanted some food. Armands the beast shark went for a jog.

Fin said to Armands "look at that tasty fisherman over there." Armands said "I'm going for him." Then Armands went over there and the fisherman started to pat Armands, then he was nice to him but the beastie shark ate him and went to Fin saying" hahahahahaha, I ate him all up, and his family."

Fin the fat angry shark bit Armand's eye out, so Armands was a one eyed beastie shark. Armands went to the beach to get a sunbathe and got a red bull as well. Then Fin came over asking Armands what happened. Armands said to Fin "You're the biggest bully around in the ocean." Fin said "Well at least I have two eyes" so Armands said to Fin go away. Then Armands bit Fin's tail off.

Armands said to fin can we go get a drink to calm down fin said ok so armands brought fin and him a drink and they went off the end.

Enjoyed this story? Read another one.

The ash

By Kai Townsend, year 9, Grammar School

No one knew that it had happened, overnight the island had changed from the green pastures and cragg...

Read story

dino paws

By jennifer bills, year 8, Le Murier School

helllloooooooo my name jimmmmyyyyyyyy. woooppppp wooooooppppp itsssssss dinooooooo pawwwwssss iissss...

Read story

dragon kingdom

By daniel cottoill, year 5, Amherst School

In the dungeon of the colossal castle it looked like fiery flames had burnt the mossy walls and melt...

Read story

The Missing Man

By Ashton Pleasant, year 9, Elizabeth College

Samantha was a science teacher who worked long hours, lost her husband, was paid poorly and was su...

Read story

My Imaginary World

By Joshua Osrin, year 5, Vauvert School

I didn’t know where I was, but it was the most beautiful place I had ever been. I was stunned, dazed...

Read story


By Harry Hodgson, year 7, Grammar School

I was just having a bounce on Jelly plaza when I heard it. The noise was threateningly loud.

Read story

Candy land adventure

By Mya McGrath, year 6, Amherst School

CANDY LAND ADVENTURE One day there was a young girl called Liv, she had beautiful brown hair and pe...

Read story

Biathlon Shooting

By George Mauger, year 7, Les Beaucamps School

It was the day of the 2002 Salt Lake US Winter Olympics. I was anxious because two years earlier I'd broken my leg...

Read story

Lisa into the imaginary world

By Ben Wilson, year 7, St Sampson’s School

“Time to get up, Lisa!”. "I’ll be up in a sec!” So Lisa got up and started getting ready for school....

Read story


By Alex De Lisle, year 6, Amherst School

“Son of a nutcracker,”Naruto screamed. With blood constantly dripping down his cheeks, Banana Ninja Narauto was sure he wouldn’t survive.

Read story

View entries by category

Get Inspired

Read the entries to previous WriteStuff competitions.