Intermediate. Years 7/8/9

Lisa into the imaginary world

By Ben Wilson, year 7, St Sampson’s School

“Time to get up, Lisa!”.

"I’ll be up in a sec!”

So Lisa got up and started getting ready for school. As she was tying her tie she had an instant mood swing. She remembered there were two girls in the year above her (in year 10) who picked on her every day, it was getting to the point of bullying. She dreaded school.

Lisa got to the front door of her school and took a deep breath in and said to her self it’s going to be ok. So she walked into school, and look who was there, it was the two year 10’s who had been mean to Lisa over the past year.

“Hey Jerk”. said the two girls as they flicked their hair.

Lisa just walked passed, with a tear dripping down her left cheek. Lisa turned up at her first class. Relieved that she was away from the two girls, Lisa sat down in her seat ready for register, but just after her name was said she asked the teacher if she could go to the toilet.

“Yes, you may.”

So she walked slowly to the toilet as she wasn’t in a rush and as she opened the door she got a big breeze which engolfed her body. She sensed something weird was going on. Swooosh! Booosh!

“Help!” Help!...Ouch my head.” Her eyes came back to life. They opened wide and all was in the air was shock. She had just been swallowed by a hole and teleported to some no ordinary world. Lisa couldn’t believe her eyes.

”Hallo, miss. Wat ya name?”

“My name is Lisa.”


“May I ask where am I?”

“Wat do ya mean? Yu not arand frum arand hear?”


“Stay away frum mey you weird creature!”

“No! No! Please, I need you to get me out of here.”

“There is no way out of hear.”

Lisa dropped to her knees and cried into her hands.

“Hey,” said a voice from behind. “You can get out of here.”


“All you have to do is defeat the closas dragon.”

“Ok, I will do anything to get out of this place.”

So the voice gave her the directions to the battle field.

When they got there, she put on a suit, got the sword of determination and went for it.

Aaaaaaah. Lisa jumped in the air and stabbd the dragon. It fell to its death the dragon of determination had never been defeated ever before, but this was the end.

“Yes I did it!”

Lisa woke up. “Lisa, Lisa” you still with us..."

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