Intermediate. Years 7/8/9

Coming from the bank

By Jay Allsopp, year 7, La Mare de Carteret School

They heard a "bang" coming from the bank they instantly knew who it was. It was the terrorists. The operators went to see what they had done. When they got half way there they saw some helicopters surrounding the place. The police had barricaded around the bank and was trying to enter the bank. Thermite ran up to the wall and placed his bomb on it. The charge was so powerful that it blew Thermite back. Caviera rushed inside clearing the building with her silenced pistol terrorists fell to the ground as the shot pierced their heart. Next Ash ran into the building and opens a wall with her breaching charge. One terrorist is waiting for ash and shoots, but his first shot misses Ash ducks. She tried to shoot back but she forgot to reload it before she entered and got shot straight in the head "got one" the terrorist said as Ash falls to the floor. The terrorists regroup and shout "you will never come in" but while they were saying that Fuze cluster charged the room. The terrorists heard the cluster charge and tried to escape the building but it was too late the cluster charge had already exploded by the time they opened the door. By now the operators were told the terrorists were planting a bomb. They had to get in soon everyone rushed in they went though the halls, up the stairs. Jager stopped and stole some of the money then Bandit saw and joined in they stole over 1000 pounds without anyone knowing. Thermite ran into the building and turned round a corner he saw a terrorist he stared at him. the bomb was going to go off in ten nine eight seven six five four three two one...

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